p5 Critque

 As we viewed my p5 project, I had some suggestions such as working on a scoring system so that when the apples interact with the basket, it keep count on how many you catch! When I do this feature to add a restart button as well. I got good feedback from classmates saying they liked it and the layout of it. One more suggestion I got is to make the time of day change throughout it so viewers can interact and change it as they play.

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